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The No.1 Reason Many Marketing Promotions Fail

Many marketers spend hours and hours (or even days) working on the content of their promotions. They understand their audience; share the features and emphasize the benefits; include their credibility; and weave in an emotional element that grabs the reader and compels them to keep reading right to the end. (At least, I hope they do all that.)

So by the time they’re finished writing their promo, they’re eager to send it out. They slap on a title, sit back and wait for the sales to come in…but they’ve neglected the vital component – the headline.

The result – no one reads the wonderful words they’ve written because they weren’t enticed to – therefore, no sales.

Your headline packs the power to attract a reader (aka potential customer) or let them slip on by.

A good headline:

  • Helps select your best prospects.
  • Motivates action by stirring an emotion.
  • Appeals to the prospect’s self-interest.
  • Communicates the strongest benefit.
  • Delivers a clear and understandable message.
  • Usually answers the question “what’s in it for me.”
  • Pulls your reader into the body of your message.
  • Sets the tone for the offer.

The difference between a good headline and a feeble headline is success or failure. It doesn’t matter how good your advertisement is if it doesn’t get read.

Before you begin writing a word of your promotional content, write at least 50 headlines. Yes, this takes time but the results are worth it. Once you’ve put effort into writing a fabulous headline, the content nearly writes itself.

And finally, test your headline…send out a promo with your best headline and see the results. Then send out a second promo with a different headline. Track which has the best response. Your “best” headline may surprise you…a twist of the words could change the way you do business.

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Susan Regier, owner of Vantage One Writing, is an in-demand copywriter, marketing strategist, and business breakthrough specialist to ambitious entrepreneurs who want to have a profitable business they are passionate about. She has the uncanny ability to find the hidden gems in a business that can ignite sales and profits for her clients. Claim your free guide: 15 Tips to Increase Your Influence, Attract More Clients & Make More Money at